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Pain or Pleasure

I call out to you
For the release of oblivion,
You call out to me
From the comfort of shadows.

A cold, dark kind of love
For a cold, dark kind of world,
The walls we build in our hearts
Slowly begin to fall.

Does it matter if it hurts
To love in a world without love?
Does it matter if the pelasure
Comes from shared pain?



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  • vampira1665 silver member
    August 25, 2008
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    Wow, that was touching. It was soft though, to me.

    Hugs,
    vampi


  • Desire gold member
    August 20, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Pain or Pleasure
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ while taking in Your words: release of oblivion- for some reason while reading this- I kept being shown reference to different realms- also fractals- and bizarre as it may sound- a sea urchin for some reason shown that creature also when reading the last line- was seeing an image of two people joined at the hip- like conjoined twins-however that is to be interpreted-
    - Whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully this makes some sense~
    Excellent take on the prompt ~
    Powerful images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • charcoal
    August 18, 2008

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    Does it matter if the pelasure
    Comes from shared pain

    beautiful lines
    straight from the heart? coz that's where they went lol