If I gave my heart to you
Would you take good care of it
And make me understand
I have been in love before
And I found I wanted more
Than just to be somebody's friend
So if you look into my eyes
You will see
What you mean to me
Search your heart search your soul
And when you find me there
You'll search no more
So if I place my trust in you
Don't hide your love away
Stay here by by side
Don't break my heart in two
I just couldn't bear such pain
If you told me to go again
And I hope and pray that I
Would love to hear you say
That you love me too
If I gave my heart to you
A contest entry
- Write Me from a Melody - Music Quote Inspired by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended August 27, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Help me believe by schellou.
330 points, ended September 19, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was really beautiful.. A plea and yet a statement all in one..This was expressed so softly as well.. I really loved this, it read so smoothly.. Thank you very much for sharing.. And well deserving of the bronze..
Angel
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Well written lyrics for the ones given. And you practically used the quote within your own piece, adding to it. Nicely done.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm
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