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Midnight And Moonlight

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So bewitching, the midnight hour,
princess falls from her ivory tower.
Reality sets in, clock strikes twelve,
into darkness plunge and delve.

One step away from losing mind,
as lover severs the ties that bind.
Falling deeper into the unknown,
tattered heart needs to be sewn.

Twelve times for me the bell tolls,
start of a new day for hurting souls.
No easy way when love falls apart,
to mend, get over a broken heart.

Some love is forever, so too the pain,
some times sun never shines again.
Midnight hour,  most painful of all,
neath moonlight, into sadness I fall.

 

 

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  • Susan John Francis
    August 20, 2008
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    As always a beautiful piece. Creates a picture thanks for sharing .
    Love Susan

  • Lisa Haslett
    August 18, 2008

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    Excellent Poem

    This is really good woman!Your on a roll,I love reading your poems they usually rhyme and have a good picture,or good rhythm.You are a star!Keep up the good work!Great job from the poet!Lisa K haslett Raytown Missouri!


  • JinSays gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    One step away from losing mind,
    as lover severs the ties that bind.
    Falling deeper into the unknown,
    tattered heart needs to be sewn.


    This is absolutely marvelous. I loved every word, every line. The story you told was enchanting, and I'm still smiling, bravo!
    Wonderful stuff here,
    best wishes and blessings always,
    jin


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    August 16, 2008

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    lonliness

    is always the longest to with stand,God is always right there by our side, no matter what we have ..very sad but well written poem
    good luck in the contest
    Lin


    • Sandygram silver member
      August 17, 2008
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      Thank you my friend. So nice to read your lovely comment. You take care.

      Blessings,
      Sandy

  • chiefmac
    August 16, 2008

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    This is a lovely Cinderella poem. The party is over and reality finds the princess who cleans the house. Hoping the prince will find where she hides to renew a love that is placed inside. The prince never shows and life goes on to start over. The clarity and emotion draws the reader into this complex heart that love would sustain. Good luck with the contest.


    • Sandygram silver member
      August 16, 2008
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      Thank you my friend. You always have wonderful insight into my poetry. Nights are the longest when in pain. But that is why God made sunshine, so the night always ends and brings a new day. A chance to hope and dream again.
      Always enjoy your thoughtful comments when you stop by. Take care.

      Bless You,
      Sandy


  • Gwenevere
    August 16, 2008

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    So sad and reflective.The start of a new day for hurting souls.That is a great line.Yes, those days are endless for those in pain.Just a little typo sadness, Ros


  • Ti Amo Te Quiero
    August 16, 2008
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    Love the flow of your poem!! good luck in the contest


  • Riamh
    August 16, 2008
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    That's simply beautiful!
    A great poem. Well done, you.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    August 16, 2008

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    Oh my!

    Beautifully sad this reaches through the screen and straight to my heart

    Best of luck hun!
    ♥
    Stay safe
    Love to you
    ~Manda

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