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"The one not dancing in the ballroom"

"The one not dancing in the ballroom"

She wore a new dress
but put on her old slippers
    ones she had for years
        that got her through so much
                  so comfortable
                    easy to slip into
it was her lucky pair after all
but
  no matter what she wore,
she still needed someone
          to hold her up
                      and spin her
someone
to put her back in her chair
        so do I
In love, I am the paraplegic ballarina

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Option #2



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  • Wind 03
    August 21, 2008
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    sadddd

    sad but touching well written ....this poem speaks of a lonelness no matter what she put on she wasnt happy because she doenst have someone in her lifs...really saddddd....I could be wrong!but thats what i took from this poem well done!

    juliet


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    this poem is very sad to me.. the emotions just jumping off the page. this poem pulled on the heart strings and pulled them quite hard.

    you did an excellent job with both the prompt & your poem.

    good luck

    kat