Dreams of a phone call being for me
And i pick up the phone like who could this be?
Knowing that its him on the other end
I answer with a sweet tone and huge grin.
Hours pass by and we're still on the phone
Knowinng i should get off before my mom comes home....
I tell him I have to go because I have no choice
Knowing when i get off the phone i'll miss his voice.
Looking forward to the next day we talk
Or really breath on the phone since that's all that goes on.
Yearning to see because i love what he's about
All i got is love for him and never no doubts.
Weeks of convincing myself he's not like my father
He won't cheat on me, leave me and not even bother.
he'll be the best, shine a whole new light for me
Have me seeing things i never thought to see.
Of course he won't know it but i'll show him in ways
Like the wink of my eye,or the switch in my hip, or a perfect smile on rainy days.
And when we break up, because i know we will
He'll teach me things that will make him real
That love is the best thing a person can have
So when they find love they better be quick to grab.
See what dreams can do for me ,can't do for those
Because mother nature picked real people for them
but for me, otherwise she chose.
Author notes
option 2. my 2nd poem ever written. enjoy!
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good job on your second poem. Trust me you are on your way to becoming a wonderful poet. Thanks for entering and good luck! -
Good write
I really enjoyed this write so much, you did really well with it, and the person who commented below, has cheated before so don't listen to her whining haha. Ummm but yea awesome write, I really enjoyed it, great write and best of luck in my contest
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your second poem??? really??? its really good though! lol. the rhyming was really good. and i liked it. you know, i have always thought that about each new boyfriend that i have gotten, that they wont cheat on me, but i havent been all that lucky so far. and i really like the last three lines. it really sets the mood for the poem. good job and keep up the good work!
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welcome to allpoetry
well done on this hun, lots of emotion in it, and the doubt that can be with the love of people that are not supposed to be together.only mistake I could see was a misspelling of break in line 19 you have brake( as in a cars brakes)
and thanks for sharing this with us here and for joining the site. good luck in the contest.
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thanks i would have never noticed
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It was very good hun... sweet
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