Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Flowing Spirit

Flowing through life
Like a river or lake  

Spirit of water
Calm and peaceful strong and fierce  

Loving life happy and free
Adapting to every challenge as it comes

Never letting things get in my way
Giving comfort to those who need it  


Author notes

This is short but it is how I think of my sign
Written January 14th, 2004

A contest entry

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • dark desire
    February 22, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    oh robin this is beautiful! wow you are an awsome poet. thanks for reading my short story... it makes me happy to know that i am one of the only erotica writers you read. you know it just kinda makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. love you lots and hope to talk to you soon! -pixie

  • Sunshine28
    January 15, 2004
    Edit | Reply
    I feel a certain peace come over me just reading these words. I especially love the line "Giving comfort to those who need it" that in itself is how I try to live my life day to day. Thank you for the read.