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Tomorrow Im gone

Im leaving tomorrow,
I want you to know,
Its important to me
That you should know
Why it is that I have to go.

Im sick of this shit,
I cant take anymore,
My life is a mad house
but not anymore

You treat me like crap
you scream and you swear
Quite frankly,
For you I no longer care

You want me to stay,
You don't want me to go,

I have a line for you,
I think it fits quite well,

“I’m disinclined to acquiesce to your request…means ‘NO.’"

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“Gummy bears will soon take over the world”
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  • Missa
    August 16, 2008
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    lol the pirates of the caribbean quote fits well!


  • thesefadingstars.
    August 16, 2008
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    I like this poem....The last line is great! fantastic write!