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Abounded by love

Missing image
You left me to suffer
Knelling by your stone
Did you ever relies
What blood Coloured teardrops
I could cry from these broken eyes

Did you care that the cord

That you wound around my neck
Would connect me to your death
That I would be waiting
Until the one took me too
Therefore, I could watch over you again

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this comes from my thawing heart.. can you hear it beat?

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  • penman gold member
    August 20, 2008
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    Excellent

    Wonderful creation, so very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    August 16, 2008

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    This is really sad to me it is hard to lose the one that you care about and feel all alone like you have nothing I know he feeling well great take on hte prompt