Unfinished Symphony

melodies dancing through my cortex
twisting concertos into a blend
between originality and classical tones
and with the constant rise and fall of notes
of digits dancing on piano keys
so delicate and lilting
as though captured within a dream
it's with that I sleep,
this symphony for now .....
unfinished.

Author notes

picture option 3 http://xxpaperflowersxx.deviantart.com/art/At-Peace-with-My-Passion-39527524 as used on this page. word limit 30-60.

my word count = 50, hope you enjoy.

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It's Quickie Time Again.!!! You Know You Can't Resist... by Sweet Impatience. 1010 points, ended August 19, 2008, 14 entries
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Pamela A Lamppa
October 27, 2008

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Oh my, this poem has much potential and could develop quite well into a longer piece as well.

Nice job with the parameters presented. ~Pamela
XxrockxXxgirlxX
September 20, 2008

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Ah. Unfinished things irk me so. This reminds me of when I write a poem, and come back to it, I leave it and come back to it and I typically just leave it unfinished
Ms. Black Eyeliner
August 28, 2008

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umm ok so i love you

just fwi

lol jk

but this is amazing

i'm a singer so this is fantastic and i love the flow and everything great job
Angelflower
August 17, 2008

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Oh.. I really like this.. The imagery was really vivid and I really like the way it flowed.. You did a wonderful job with this prompt.. Well done..

Angel
poet2angels
August 16, 2008

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wow this is beautiful and I love the ending...leaving one wanting for more....
Enchanting, Cuz

Lynda