it began with that spark of the synapses
the electricity of life
working through human bodies;
a movement without cessation -
we prowled the earth
to tame, to crush wildflowers underfoot;
evolution stacks its extinct carcasses:
a stepladder for the victorious to rise.
the stench of blood, of primal battles,
has already soaked deep into the earth:
man turns to the crystal cut stars
in exhausted, body-worn boredom.
the pure strike of light rays
puncturing through air to earth;
coolly indifferent to its point of contact;
a universe stripped to laws, clean materials.
we yearn to eject from the earth,
to play with an unsullied space;
man stoops over workbenches with graphite pencils
and creates contraptions to catapult
our retired generals, our fleets of glory
to their new terrain of distinction.
A contest entry
- PIF Merci! by Age of Rain.
1000 points, ended September 3, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I am going to have a difficult time judging this contest...
'we yearn to eject from the earth,
to play with an unsullied space; '
How true.
This poem is striking an wonderful. You have presented an excellent piece of art.


