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Naturel waves

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Bricks and mortar tower tall
where cascading ripples fall.

The orb of daylight gleams
on the pretty natural scenes.

From the cliff-ed edged hues
a flowing river dances through.

Tropical trees slumber still
on natures lonely hill.






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  • spiritualangel
    August 31, 2008
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    Beautiful. Best of Luck


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    A beautifully written poem
    Lovely imagery and those lines flow so well together they meld.

    From the cliff-ed edged hues
    a flowing river dances through.

    love those lines
    Best wishes and good luck hun
    Julie


  • Black Narcissus gold member
    August 19, 2008
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    Really good

    I could think of nothing when I saw that pic.Nicely written.