Bricks and mortar tower tall
where cascading ripples fall.
The orb of daylight gleams
on the pretty natural scenes.
From the cliff-ed edged hues
a flowing river dances through.
Tropical trees slumber still
on natures lonely hill.
Author notes
picture promt
please credit http://www.utipit.com/.../12.2007/31/paint_009.jpg
A contest entry
- PIF Picture Prompt 10x10 46th Contest by Spiritualangel by spiritualangel.
550 points, ended August 31, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful. Best of Luck
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A beautifully written poem
Lovely imagery and those lines flow so well together they meld.
From the cliff-ed edged hues
a flowing river dances through.
love those lines
Best wishes and good luck hun
Julie
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Really good
I could think of nothing when I saw that pic.Nicely written.





