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Making Love with the Moon (reserve)

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Within the night we danced wild, as the waters flowed
beneath the moon we played awhile, with hands that never slowed
your breath in my brunette hair, left me gasping with anticipation
lips were moving here and there, as heat was followed by precipitation.
pouring down across my breasts, sweat of pleasure from a love
across my stomach your tongue rests and whispers weren't enough
moonlight flickered across the sea, as my petals kissed the sands
leaving me breathless thoughts did flee, when passion poured from your hands
our bodies danced along the moonlight, sweet visions enticed our eyes
electrifying it was when done right and sweet harmony broke into cries
reaching the peak of our fantasy, we got lost within the tides
moon to sands, our unity, all passion of love and life collides
so as we make love with the moon tonight, please whisper my name
for when the stars kiss the clouds goodnight, nothing will be the same

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moon part 3

yea for the moon lover

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  • JinSays gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    so as we make love with the moon tonight, please whisper my name
    for when the stars kiss the clouds goodnight, nothing will be the same

    Gorgeous!
    The fonts were tiiiiiiny, but I managed. Ending is superb
    Yeah, it must be that moon.
    Best wishes to you,
    Jin


  • Swangrnv gold member
    August 16, 2008
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    beautiiful

    and magical. much luck to you in the contest my friend.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 16, 2008

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    A beautiful and touching write for the moon and all moonlovers, keep them coming, great writing.



  • Griswold
    August 16, 2008

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    Beautifully written honey, very softly written and full of love. Sets a very sensual mood. Love you sweetheart...Scott