Haunting image
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man stands by himself
ghostly hand touches on arm
needs to change his pants
## 2
spirit appears nights
haunting graveyard like lost soul
cross over through light
## 3
boo are you scared
little man of my presence
i think you should be
Jenelda white August 16th 2008
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A contest entry
- FOR MEMBERS of HUGH WYLES FAVOURITES GROUP ONLY by hugh wyles.
1750 points, ended September 4, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think?
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Too much beer in my bath tub
I swim in it for fun
neighborhood beer drinking hub
we all soon get undone
Tiki Cat
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Dear Jen,
Enjoyed your ghostly haiku's (especially the first one)!
Trick photography by you? Well done photo by whoever created it! 
Best of Luck in this contest!
Love,
Maureen
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Not mr Maureen, but I agree it's trick photography.
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First one is very funny!!!
What a sissy
Those are very good Halloween poems
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Hahaha Terry. BOOOOOOOO! Oh golly I frightened myself then.
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Thanks Mari.
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Wooo wooo
Yikes!
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OOOOO Jen, a very spooky picture, I wouldn't like to meet her on a dark night anywhere!
Great haiku's
Love Hine
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Dear Jenelda,
I'm not sure whether the man in number #1 needs to change his pants or give up drinking. Either way it would by a scary experience. Particularly if it took place in a graveyard or a dark alley. If number #2 is the same spirit, things are starting to get really serious. I'm off outa here!!
Good luck in contest. I'm giving up blue-vein cheese! LOL
Applause, love and hugs, XXX Hugh (R.)
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Why be afraid? The ghost is such a looker!
One funny, one serious...one uses the left side of the brain, the other the right. Write one like I would...then you'd be using no sides of your brain!
If I ever win a Huguie contest again I'm having a halloween contest...even if it is in July.
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Chills! Chills! Chills!
Great ghostly capture!
M-C
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