Dressed in pink and feeling gorgeous,
the tiny girl felt everything but nervous.
Here she was, all ready to go,
sitting expectantly on the floor for the glow
of the scarlet lights on the dance theatre floor,
hoping that her audience would want to see more.
When she finally came out with a blushing face,
ready to show her enchanting, rhythmic grace,
the ones scouting dancing aptitude cheered out loud,
and our beautiful dancing friend looked in the crowd
for the man she loved very dearly;
who would never miss a single recital, clearly.
The little ballerina found him and gave him a smile,
and he was just so glad his precious pretty darling
would not leave home for a long while.
Author notes
i know its a weird title. if u read this, then i luvz yaz! -pbf
A contest entry
- In Desperate Need of Inspiration by JustFallingApart.
300 points, ended August 25, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I know it's not that good, that's why I need comments! =D
Comments
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Its not weird
Its Awesome!
You have a great talent!
Keep It up
-xxx-
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very good
but I really think that theres something missing in this poem that would make iit absolutely perfact.
So I give a one smile.
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dodn't say it's not that good, i liked it, thanks for entering
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this is so sweet and tender but in a subdued way that is wonderful. I love your flow of words and the imagery. I love the sentiment you added at the end, it was perfect. great job on this one!
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ahhh sweet
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I like the story and the emotion
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