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in this moment

Missing image

twilight's faint luminance
dances off silken skin

heightened senses
amplifying every detail

a lover's gentle caress

strong hands, so tender 


soft, delicate aroma
sweet honey in her kiss

 

beating hearts

blending in unison 


enraptured in this moment

as two become one

 

united in their passion

lovers of a lifetime

  

 

Author notes

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photo prompt: http://slagophoto.deviantart.com/art/Lovers-80544145

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  • Soft-Rain gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    Congrats again!

    Hey Mr. I thought you were going to save some Gold for me lol!
    This again was beautiful and you own the words... i know

    *hugs*
    I love you baby,
    ~Lisa~


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    this is a very beautiful poem that you have written. words spoken right from the heart. so full of love which is woven into each word.

    good luck

    kat


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    August 16, 2008
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    Beautiful words very wells spoken. Great job.

    Mike


  • KayJay
    August 16, 2008

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    Bravo Tim... a wonderfu write, full of tenderness and love...with just touch of jalapeno Excellent entry friend!
    Ken


  • Soft-Rain gold member
    August 16, 2008
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    I can't pick just one line all speak of such love felt,
    You have the most beautiful soul and your passion brings me to my knee's.

    This part says it all:

    united in their passion


    lovers of a lifetime


    I love you,baby


  • Solo Wisp gold member
    August 16, 2008

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    Well ... well ... well ... did we visit the wife? heh

    Nice fluid movement and emotion poured into your words ... the image doesn't do your words justice.

    It has been a while since I've seen 'enraptured', nicely done here. Best of luck!

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