in my life
blessed by love's lullaby
you heard my haunting lost song
calling for harmony
you caught this falling star
in your hands
beautiful sound
without
this voice singing
to me life would not exist
i fell for heart's music
Author notes
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A contest entry
- It's Quickie Time Again.!!! You Know You Can't Resist... by Sweet Impatience.
1010 points, ended August 19, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poems That Begin With The Letter 'L'. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
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Comments
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beautiful
the image and the song made me drowsy...u should sing record and send me...i will use it each night...lol -
Hearts music sweeter and sweet the passion raging within its firey walls of redumption, we all crave it but we shalln't all admit it. I wont for one. I lust for the sound of the hounds, my eager army await my comand and I will give it. Their screams will echo, reverbate from every tree, the Orcs are coming, the blood shall stain every poppy petal and I can laugh. My lullaby is death.
Beautiful imagry posed here well done.
Goreck -
love's lyrical lilt landing on my lobes. nice llls and sweet description of romance.
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amazing. what more do i have to say.
ur writing is beautiful. i love it and could read it all day long.
great work!!
♥
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Its abstract and very deep at tehsame time, Still always a treat to read your wokr, Its not long, but not too short, just right! keep up the great work!
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so sy ad... reminds me of those times I'd been left by someone I adored and was sitting contimplating, whether it's worth hoping for someone else anymore.
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Beautiful Sentiments, Poet!!!
Congrats on the Emerald Cup!! And thank you for your wonderful, softly spoken words!!
"you heard my haunting lost song
calling for harmony"
"you caught this falling star
in your hands"
Awesome - I love it!!
Peace Always, Cyn 
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too beautiful
this echoes greatly in my heart
congratulations on your greenie. -
wow, honorable I think not, astounding and worthy of gold at the least,
the music of two heartstrings pulled to accord, you have captured well here. One can alomost hear the symphony of syncopated beats, and the soft whispers of flesh joining in a passionate melody of love. great write~~Artis
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congrats on the HM baby!
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I loved this, it was a nice take on the prompt to create a wonderful piece. I loved the idea of someone catching you as a falling star and I also loved the last two lines of the first stanza, I think they really capture the way we can all feel lost and how sometimes we just long for someone to hear us. Great work. x
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Very very nice. The sentiments are very well expressed. Great job.
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how very beautifully done... as always. your words are magical. thank you for sharing this with me today. viyanna rosemarie
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love's sweet music. can be felt in our hearts.. melting the hardest of hearts. it can be haunting, beautiful & sad. but most of all its profound its heard from miles around. no one I think is immune to love. though for many years I didn't think that I was worthy of it..
funny isn't how one person can change a person's total outlook in life all because they're loved by another.
excellent poem, yes I know that you love me.. I'm glad that you do
good luck in the contest
kat
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Well
Sounds like love to me dear poet. A gentle song that whispers his name perhaps
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