Stitch me closed
Each note perfect along the string
Follow the beats back and forth
Each riff calling to the previous
As the next cries it's name
Seal the gaps
Close the seams
End the song
As the last note dies
A contest entry
- OPTIONS I- GOLD - SILVER - BRONZE FOR EACH by Florida Sunshine.
475 points, ended August 16, 2008, 20 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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As short and sweet as this is .... I love it... Its powerful in every word. WOW ~ .... I've read it several times and still has the same affect on me.
Beautifully said, down to the last line.
I also notice the metaphoric connection this brings with the feelings of loving another. ~
You've certainly brought the two together. Very nice job -- I enjoyed this a great deal ~ you did a wonderful job! ~ Thank you so much for entering this, and sharing it with me ~ I do appreciate the opportunity to read and review your work.
Best of luck to you,
Florida Sunshine
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