Out of the fire came sadness,
drenched with all its desire
the death of the earth upon it,
fear in the shadows grow stronger.
Author notes
Another short one... It was long, but right now I'm practicing on writing short poems, as they are not my strong point.
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Its really good I like it...
It catches people's attention quite quickly. -
You've said it all here, how I can relate so much and oh so many...
Pain, the more it hurts, the more love grows deep...
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I like this poem. i like the simplicity of it. the only thing is that i can recommend for this poem like this, is perhaps changing the title. i felt that it was a little out of place. it doesn't seem to fit the poem, but is really up to you.
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Thank you! In all honesty, it was the first thing to come to mind. I do have a reason for choosing the title apart form it popping in my head, but... I should think of a better title, I do agree.
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