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“to love you”
is a fragment
an incorrect and dangling notion
so carelessly thought out


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I've been digging up ideas from an old, abandoned poems in hopes of conquering this Mt. Everest of a writer's block. I see many fragments in my future.

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  • MelodiousDreaming
    August 31, 2008
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    Ah but quite the fragment it is. I like this, makes a point in so few words...

    • if sighing
      September 2, 2008
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      thanks, I love fragments. It means I don't have to finish them!