love.mirrors.insanity
I’m falling for anaesthetic
[a small something synthetic]
I am:
An Emotional Hypochondriac
so I only need myself
I was brave & I was good
I threw myself in
[just as I should]
I jumped into your arms
H
E
A
D first
[you’d think I would have learnt]
In.Love [&] Insanity
romance & profanity
I’m starting to see;;
The Best Things in Life
have a guarantee
-I hate you.I hate you-
I really do
& I love you [so it must be true]
real.life.makes.no.sense
so I’m falling for anaesthetic;
[a small something synthetic]
A (glass) of stars
…then a bottle more…
To spin me
a(r(o(u(n(d & a)r)o)u)n)d
because the truest thing I’ve found
is that the b.e.s.t things in life
come with a guarantee
real.thoughts.hurt.my.head
I am:
A Professional Lover
and anything you can do? I can do better
because I’m in-love -
[I’ve finally learnt]
nothing sparkles like the stars,
but vodka and your eyes
[and darling – vodka.makes.me.sick]
Author notes
As you can see, im not really a dirty pretty writer. variety is nice though.
oh and the 'HEADfirst' thing is refusing to format proper like, you if it looks a little silly thats why. not my fault, i promise.
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Great
What a great poem... awesome flow. It's very song like. My fav lines were:-I hate you.I hate you-
I really do
& I love you [so it must be true]
AND
love.mirrors.insanity
because I believe they are both very true.
The dirty pretty tools weren't too over powering which is good... but they also didn't really help either.
Still a great write. Congrats on trying a new form.
Thanks for entering
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AMAZING!
im in love with it.
Completely, freakishly in love.
lol.
This is great.
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In.Love [&] Insanity
romance & profanity
-those two lines are the most brilliantly flowing rhyming i've ever seen@
so I’m falling for anaesthetic;
[a small something synthetic]
-i love how you repeat those lines.
a(r(o(u(n(d & a)r)o)u)n)d
-magnificent formatting!
and fuck it; if there is a better ending then i have just seen there, then it'd be pretty inhuman, cause it is fricken awesome!!
if this doesn't win my contest then god forbid...
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Very confusing. Of course, just like real life as you say, there isn't always a fine line between love and hate, understanding and ignorance, what are they, if we really ask ourselves who knows?
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wow!! I really really luv this!! it. is . amazing.
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I think you put an extra 'h' in hypocondriac, but yeah I'm not sure, as I'm a bit sleepy. Stunningly wrote.
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Wow.
I really, really liked. There are some absolutely profound thoughts and imagery in there that just blew me away. And I'm blowin' in the wind. Ha.
Lovely. Simply lovely!
=D
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amazing dirty pretty,
And darling, vodka makes me sick. God I love that!!! one of my faves for sure!
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awsome
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Wow.
This blew me away. I can't even put in words how this made me feel. This has to be one of my all time favorites.
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