Every time you say my name
it send shivers down my spine
every time you touch my side
my heart begins to fly
your eyes are my muse
and your smile is my hope
its the little things
that make my heart soar
when i spend my time with you
my mind is at ease
my soul begins to rest
because i know i am safe
its in your arms that i wish to be
the comfort and guidance it brings
its calming to say the least
but rest assured
i am assured my rest
as i am flying
with my feet off the ground
Author notes
hey.. Aleks.. yes.. this is for you.. lol
A contest entry
- Be Prompt by Darkwell.
1050 points, ended August 20, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is just awesome sweet. love just lifts us and to have that with someone just changes the way you look at the world
but rest assured
i am assured my rest
as i am flying
with my feet off the ground
i relate. this is very well penned and full of heart
WTG! Good luck in the contest -
lol thanks erica and alex... lol
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Very sweet. You're lucky to have each other
"when i spend my time with you
my mind is at ease
my soul begins to rest
because i know i am safe
its in your arms that i wish to be
the comfort and guidance it brings
its calming to say the least"
I know the feeling, but only on a one-way street. -
So cute babe. and well written
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AWWWWW, thanks...
awwww, thanks... I LESS THAN THREE YOU!!!
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