You let them get into you head
They tell you these nasty lies
And you just set there like your dead
Not listening to my cries
I tell you I did not cheat
I say I am just yours
But them I can’t seem to beat
The truth I can’t reassure
You seem to just turn around
Not listening to my voice
In this confusion I was bound
It seems as if there wasn’t a choice
I say that I never did such a thing
But my words bounce off the wall
Now your sliding off your ring
And I just seem to fall
I can’t lose you babe
Not now, not ever
Our love I must save
I have to get it together
I can’t lose your smile
I won’t walk away
I will run a thousand miles
If you will just stay
A contest entry
- Rhyme and Flow part 9 Feelings - 50,000 points series by cricketjeff.
4000 points, ended September 7, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what did u think? not my favorite, but whatever.
Comments
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Thank you for your entry in the contest. An interesting poem dealing with feelings. Your rhyming is good but your rhythm and flow are a little awkward in places, but a good read nevertheless.
All the best at judging
Sue and Jeff
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i like it alot, its really....idk how to put this into words, its full....(i hope that makes sense)
the imagery is good too : ) -
awwwww..I likee thisss..I like this alot..filled with emotion..great write
I can’t lose your smile
I won’t walk away
I will run a thousand miles
If you will just stay
Really nice..I love it
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