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How can you look at her and say that

i see a beautiful child
that is fighting as hard as she can
to lead a normal life
with a disease what makes it
very hard to do

i don't understand sometimes
how people can just look at the outside
thinking and saying
she’s fat
she’s to thin
she’s strange
ugly..

do you even know
how much you hurt the other people
who you are saying it to
you are not just effecting them
but the ones around them

i am a reject
you haven't seen me but if you did..
Would you hate me as well
or would you look into my heart instead
and see what real people see,

i am better then all of you

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So your prompt today is: Society's Reject

she is beautiful my auntie

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this comes from my thawing heart.. can you hear it beat?

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  • jcat gold member
    August 19, 2008
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    She is as beautiful as you sweets.....Thank you!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    this is outstanding my dear daughter.. I look in your heart, you're beautiful to me inside and out. the people that can't the see the beauty from within, their lose..

    mommy loves you and I love this poem that you have written.

    good luck

    mommy