I have an old, old, Teddy Bear
His name is Theodore
But I just call him Teddy
He is the bear I adore
He has the kindest eyes
They roll around you see
His nose is oh so cute
His smile so sweet to me
I love to give him lots of hugs
Toss him in the air
Take him everywhere I go
Along with his little high chair
He's been with me a long, long time
I couldn't part with him for long
He gives me so much joy and comfort
My heart sings out with a song
I like to cuddle up with him
'Cause he's my friend so kind
Then gently as I fall asleep
Teddy Bears fill up my mind
Author notes
I used the name Theodore from the list.
A contest entry
- TEDDY BEARS!!!! by ourgirlFriday.
475 points, ended August 17, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
Comments
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This is a really cute little poem. I still have my old teddy bear and even though I never use him anymore I don't think I could ever get rid of him. Great job!
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Thanks PM. I appreciate you reading my poems and commenting on them..Katie
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this reminds me of my daughter whom I haven't seen in like 8 months, so adorable and beautifully written, great job, and congrats on the HMs.
***HUGS***
thelegend
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Thanks legend. I pray you will soon be able to come home to your family.May God bless you and keep you in His care. Katie
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Congrats on the HM dear. I'm glad to see that this won some points. I really liked it.
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This is adorable!!! The imagery is awesome and I can just picture a child with his bear when reading this. Good luck with it..
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Thanks daviscth. Teddy Bears has always been a favorite. Even now I have one sitting on my sofa....Katie
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Nicely done, good rhyme and beat and a cute story too. Best of luck to you in the contest...Scott
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Thank you Griswold. Your kind comment is greatly appreciated....Katie
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Ooohhhhhhh!
Now I want to snuggle with mine! This is very well done! The flow is smooth, the rhyme isn't forced, the theme is consistent and perky! Lovely write! Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you OrangeMarmalade for your comment and for the HM. I enjoyed entering your contest....Katie
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