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Wind In Everything

Cooling you
Caressing you
Putting you in a trance

Fingering your jacket
Tangling your hair
Inviting you to dance

Sending you gifts of gust
Rustling through branches
Blowing away your castle of sand

Floating above it all
Spinning and twirling the leaves of Fall
Here I am

The Breeze you need in Summer
The Breeze you feel in Spring
The Breeze among the Water

I am the Wind in Everything

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Prompt 9

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  • Darkwell
    August 17, 2008
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    What can I say, such an awesome interpret of the prompt and i love that it rhymes but at the swame time is not held tight by rhyme rules and flows in its own way too

    Sending you gifts of GUST
    RUSTling through branches
    Blowing away your castle of sand

    I love the continued sound of Gust and Rust in that part

    WTG! Good luck in the contest


  • Shadow Lynx
    August 16, 2008

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    Fingering your jacket
    Tangling your hair
    Inviting you to dance

    Beautiful poem, elevates mood and induces relaxation on reading , a calm soothing kind of read. Good luck for the contest


  • dirt in the ground
    August 15, 2008

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    Absolutely beautiful

    I am very impressed with this poem, especially with the way you chose to approach the prompt. The poem is very romantic in a calm and sweet way.

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