Hi, my name is Patches
Everyone says that I'm a cute little bear
I have no patches
I am just called Patches
I like my name
My colour is brown
I have all rainbow stripes on me too
Everyone says that i'm in books, magazines, etc
I am popular
Yay!
A contest entry
- TEDDY BEARS!!!! by ourgirlFriday.
475 points, ended August 17, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congratulations on earning the Enerald Cup in this contest young lady. Your poem is well worth it, and then some. I love Teddy bears, and yours, with its brilliant rainbow colors is the "popular" bear. Seems to me like you rank right there with "Patches"! Great work sweetheart!
MNuch Love ♥
Granny
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Aww so cute
Congrats on the trophy 
I used to have a teddy called Patches too except he was a huge Dalmatian puppy teddy, and he had a grey patch over his eye
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sooo cute! love ur poem , u know how 2 express urself...
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Oh wow!! Teddy!!!, that's so awesome!!
Patches is a funny name for a bear with no patches
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Aww this is so sweet babes
Well done to you on your HM
I love bears
Julie
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A new teddy to join the parade!
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You have lots of talent for a little girl. I used to like my teddy bear, too. I gave it to my brother, he still has it, his kids used to play with it until, they are now too old to. Hope you have yours that long. It's a great poem.
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This is a gorgeous poem Georgia. I think you are becoming as popular as Patches, you have so many wonderful friends here now.
I hope you are feeling better my precious girl, it's awful to see you so sick.
Love you lots and lots, Mum
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My teddy, had none to start off with, when he was born in teddyland a hundred years ago, now, because of all he has been through, with me, on our wonderful adventues, he is not only called Patch, he IS one!
lovely poem, magikal fairy poet, Patches sounds like a wonderful teddy
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Patches sounds like a great bear! This is a really good poem about teddy bears. Good luck in the contest!
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Good poem!
It sounds as though you had fun writing this! I liked it, you made me see a teddy bear, and I wanted to pick him up and hold him. Good luck in the contest.
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hehe nice
i like it, its cool
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That is cute!
True enough - many a bear I've come across with the name of Patches, yet not a patch to be found. Darling entry! Best of luck in the contest!
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