waxen faces blush
ripened by September's chill
awaiting the plunge
Author notes
I wish it were autumn....
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku and Bless You! by azure85.
4500 points, ended August 22, 2008, 57 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - haiku or short forms over age 15 please by misticmoonlite.
525 points, ended January 30, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Thoughts?
Comments
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pretty, yes autumn is much better than the cold icy winter, thank you for this entry, good luck
in my contest..mm

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waxen faces blush
ripened by September's chill
awaiting the plunge
It will be autumn soon, and you have the delight of the season captured within your haiku. Thank you so much.



