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Where Shakespeare? (Triolet)

Where is my teddy bear Shakespeare
Where can that poetic critter be
For breakfast he did not appear
Where is my teddy bear Shakespeare
Without him my life will be blear
Who will read poetry to me
Where is my teddy bear Shakespeare
Where can that poetic critter be

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  • Griswold silver member
    August 16, 2008

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    Nicely done Triolet, good form for this contest and a great take on the prompt. best of luck to you...Scott


  • ourgirlFriday
    August 15, 2008

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    That's cute!

    Interesting use of the word 'blear,' but I get the picture. A darling poem to think on, when I see my little cousins carrying theirs around and reading to them!


  • Solidified
    August 15, 2008

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    I stole him!

    hahahaha he's mine now..


    I love teddy bears. Next time be more careful where you leave him..


    Cute endearing poem