Tears softly falling
Eyes gently crying
Each disappointment
Is a tear on the floor
Time slowly passing
Tears slowly streaming
I wipe them away
But they’re replaced by more
Is it so hard to love me?
Am I to hard to love?
Why won’t you tell me?
So I can move on
If you love me then say it
If not then just leave me
Stop playing these mind games
I can’t take anymore
Eyes gently crying
Heart softly weeping
As I sit by myself
An empty shell on the floor
Hoping that you
Can love me
Like I love you
Author notes
A Song
A contest entry
- Be Prompt by Darkwell.
1050 points, ended August 20, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this has lovely word devices
tears softly falling
eyes gently crying
heart softly weeping
time slowly passing
im curious what style of music you hear this in your head like?
WTG! Good luck in the contest

