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Tears Softly Falling

Tears softly falling
Eyes gently crying
Each disappointment
Is a tear on the floor

Time slowly passing
Tears slowly streaming
I wipe them away
But they’re replaced by more

Is it so hard to love me?
Am I to hard to love?
Why won’t you tell me?
So I can move on

If you love me then say it
If not then just leave me
Stop playing these mind games
I can’t take anymore

Eyes gently crying
Heart softly weeping
As I sit by myself
An empty shell on the floor

Hoping that you
Can love me
Like I love you

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  • Darkwell
    August 16, 2008

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    this has lovely word devices

    tears softly falling
    eyes gently crying
    heart softly weeping
    time slowly passing

    im curious what style of music you hear this in your head like?

    WTG! Good luck in the contest