Refreshing rain beating upon my face
As I ran from that horrible place
Dark cloud seemed to sense my flight
Rain let up as I ran out of sight
Thunder and lightning roaring above
As a car door open I felt a shove
Off we sped as I gasped for breath
I was saved from a fate short of death
Who was my hero in the black cape and mask?
Just regular guy doing a masculine task…
Author notes
http://seduced-by-the-sun.deviantart.com/art/Summer-Rain-92200591
A contest entry
- Picture prompt by whispernthedark.
690 points, ended August 16, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Since I have already commented on this I will simply say thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Great interpretation you got from the picture prompt.
The fear that the persona felt was quite intense and I definitely like the last two lines where she was curious
which let the reader to be curious as well ^^
I can't say that the hero is Batman
Zorro popped in my head when I read those lines 
Good write you've got here, indeed ~ -
Did you just see The Dark Knight This is a great take on the prompt, I love those last two lines... Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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