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"Some day you will die and
Somehow something's gonna steal your carbon"

-from, Parting of the Sensory



we pour
      into this world
 
treacle of molecules


we mold, & form
    though years, ahead
shapeless, massless, still
  urge we not settle

not yet


we pour
    into each other --
  my angry curve submits
  her soft tissue
borne
this warp and weft
    of our malignant parts


we pour
      across tarmac
      into buildings
    feet, dragging
  heads - it is the walk
that slants us, this slow
                  pull
    to ground

      pray

when we pour
into earth

we are worth


    our weight in corpses






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  • Abby Eyeball
    August 16, 2008

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    i haven't listened to the song- if that's what it is, but the quote is good, and the poem is indescribably correct.

    -Abby


  • editorinchimp
    August 15, 2008
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    to assist the lost reader: listen to the song and think about the lifespan.