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The Simple Truth

Trials I've faced, but I won't let it hold me back;
for knowing you is my heart's greatest treasure.
This feeling is uplifting- taking me to dreams;
captured in a steadfast beat only for you.


No fear to control me, with words long overdue;
travelling galaxies upon stars and moonbeams-
that in your presence I've found my mind's pleasure,
completing the love that for so long I had lacked.


I've opened my heart to welcome the embrace;
awaiting a simple measure that I'm not alone.
Growing a garden within my soul, with care;
to lift your own hopes and dreams skyward.


And a time will soon come where we can move forward;
breathing as one, the very same air-
freed  of the binds we both have known;
left with a lingering smile upon gentle face.


If you don't already know my words so true-
the simple truth is that I love you!

Author notes

Prompt: ...my life is difficult, but it is my life, and I will live it ...and I know you, because I want to know you, because ...I love you..., in plain and simple words...be not afraid of this declaration ...it is the simple truth...Unknown

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  • FaerieNWonderland
    November 9, 2008
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    so sweet so real


  • rhondasail
    August 21, 2008

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    'Growing a garden within my soul, with care; to lift your own hopes and dreams skyward'...What a wonderful line that speaks of the selflessness of a loving heart. Beautiful job. Best of luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda


    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      August 21, 2008
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment, very much appreciate it.

      Storm


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 17, 2008

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    So much truth is in your loving heart my friend..wonderful emotions along.....I love it..and my thanks for sharing such a piece..well done...

  • SoulWhispher
    August 16, 2008

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    well done, this is truly a great love poem, it speaks from the heart and the soul, fantastic job, blessings John


  • Rovingone gold member
    August 15, 2008

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    Ah, what a grand good feeling this one gives to me! You certainly have found the most delicious of treasures.

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