tears fall from heart’s eyes
like sand from an hour glass
mark passage of time
Words: K.Botka
8/15/08
Author notes
My heart cries many tears!
How'm I doin'?
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a good poem - time is a healer, it always will be but sometimes, just here and there, it is a killer too.
http://allpoetry.com/column/2343593
to understand the form
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LOL...
Sure got that right! 
Is that one of your creations for your Icon? It's very appealing to me. I see The Savior's feet & His pilgrim's also! 
Thanks for the link. I'll bookmark it! 
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Wow, that's beautiful! What a nice little succinct sweet poem. The background fits nicely too. :-)
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I loved it and I think that yours are all great. when you open a poem up there is no question about whether its good, it's more what will it be about this time.
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There you go
again....lifting my spirits! Thanks for your kindness sweet face! -
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thank you so much for complimenting because every compliment lifts my spirits
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LOL
I think we have a mutual admiration going on here! You are a precious addition to my life.
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excellent haiku
I really like the first line. It creates such a deep thought, and vivid image for the reader to think about.
Jeannette
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Love the whole passage of time idea, and I loved the way you brought this together! It's beautiful, and it's one that makes you think about your own life...very nostalgic feeling. Excellent job!
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Apart from the fact that I pronounce 'tears' with 2 syllables, this is great.
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