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Solicitous

State of being full of eager desire embracing my forehead with a kiss
Mouth encompassing mine persuading me to part my lips
With your hands massaging away any pain with pleasure radiating from your fingertips
Caressing my face with a slight brushing against my cheek’s center
Warmth of you envelops me greeting the visitor waiting to enter
Tongues doing a dance all their own joining in to seal the deal
And hands wanting to participate in this passionate ritual
Your mouth sucking softly teasing my neck with its delicate movement
Trying to conquer this feeling of fear and excitement
Eyes tracing your silhouette in the rays shining down from heaven
Tasting the droplets of light that coat your mocha complexion skin
Coming alive from just your touch as a pulsating sensation grows from within
Igniting a rise in an untamable blaze of desire between my legs of sin
Slowly succumbing to the overwhelming heat grasping hold
Positioning yourself at my entrance presenting the invitation to my world
Gentle penetrations exploring the unreachable depths of my soul
Slipping further into my essence flowing together in a fluid motion
Throbbing inside of me from within my overflowing ocean
As perspiration solidifies the moaning and breathing into a harmonious melody
With deep sighs keeping the endless tempo stroking back and forth vigorously
Cradling me within in your arms rocking my body gracefully
As you spread yourself throughout my being
Guiding me to the place where you are waiting
Losing control to your rhythmical spell penetrating deep in this feeling
Encompassing me in your seductive hypnosis
As a sensation invites me to join you in the discovery of bliss
Seeing the facets once possessed within a bittersweet moment of pleasure endless



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  • Galaxy2
    October 14, 2008

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    'igniting a rise in an untamable blaze of desire between my legs of sin'
    Passionate...
    Seducing me to commit a sweet sin
    Brilliant though erotic thoughts
    creating a sensational lust
    Beautiful and sinful like you, sweet honey!
    Wet, seductive kisses...all over you!
    Galaxy2


  • D Saul So Sexy
    August 29, 2008
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    very smooth read ga good luck to you in this contest here

    D Finest ATL


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 17, 2008
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    I like your take on the prompt. great job on this poem
    very sensual and erotic..

    good luck

    kat

  • Galaxy2
    August 15, 2008
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    'between my legs of sin'
    I can't imagine of an epression more lustful than this...
    makes my legs open....

    Kisses, honey,...all over!
    Galaxy2