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Reminiscing

As I look in my backyard
at the little fort we made
almost exactly a year ago...
I can't help but reminisce
at all the fun times we had together.

I still have my little Bobby Jack
monkey that we got when we
went shopping together.
I still even have that video about 'color'
that we filmed!

Even though you moved, you're still
with me every time I hug Milo.

Distance may be the enemy here,
but we'll be friends forever.
(Even when we've both got our hot pink wheelchairs!)

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Kiwikrazi37 (used to be ImmortalCyclone)

This is about my best friend ever...she moved recently.

My Friday Write! (Write about someone you know)

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  • innocence jaded.xx
    August 16, 2008
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    Wow, this was such a powerful write. I loved it. I can sense the pain & the definite memories in this poem. Incredible write. I really liked:

    -Distance may be the enemy here,
    but we'll be friends forever.
    (Even when we've both got our hot pink wheelchairs!)
    ...

    hahah I liked the hot pink wheelchairs. It made me laugh, bahah. Thanks for entering & keep it up ! ♥