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You Never Knew

You never knew,

How much I loved you,

You never knew,

How much I thought of you,

And yet, you were taken from me,

The only thing that could ever make me happy.

Is life worth living?

Is love worth going through?

Is heaven salvation?

Why don’t you tell me?

Until my heart is filled with glee,

You will never see me,

Never again will you hurt me,

Take me, take me, take me.

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  • Solidified
    August 15, 2008
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    I like the question you pose about heaven, that's a pretty deep thought.