I can change my mind if I want to,
Nobody is telling me what to do
Your method isn’t the only way
“I’m right” that’s what I say
Why does everything end wrong?
not my fault I didn’t go along,
You gave me poor instruction,
I had the right intention…
Author notes
Prompt: stubbornness
Fifty words or less.
A contest entry
- 50 Word PIF Contest by Riftkin.
525 points, ended August 16, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is great and shows stubbornness... about like me.
Best of luck in the contest.
Riftkin
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