the moon shines-
through my window
a tree
Author notes
moon shines right now, can see it from where I sit
Friday, 23:29hr
In a list
A contest entry
- FOR MEMBERS of HUGH WYLES FAVOURITES GROUP ONLY by hugh wyles.
1750 points, ended September 4, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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And the moon is magically speaking the sweet song of the love through the image you took and made a poetic bliss..well done...
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lovley write
the moon is a delight
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I can see the moon through my window as well for the moment, while reading this lovely ku
Only unfortunate I've got this streetlamp glaring into my face instead of a tree
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excellent~
An excellent ku sis
Loved this....and the plain navy background and the light pink font....
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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I thought I knew where the lines would break, but surprise! Nice haiku Mari.
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Enjoyed your haiku! I love to go for walks during a full moon. It seems to follow me wherever I go.
Good Luck in the contest!
Maureen
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The very pulse of the night is felt most in direct moonlight. Good luck in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Effective image !
It describes without needing more words! -
Effective image !
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Ohhh I love looking at the moon and it's true, we all look at the same moon only at different times.
Great haiku.
Hine
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the moon shines-
through my window
...pervert!
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Love moons in poems and this one is so very poetic. Wonderful to think that the same moon shines down on all of us, no matter where we are.
~ Nicolette
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Your observations draw us together. I saw that same moon last night and while I'll confess you weren't there with it. This morning we connected over your poem and a cup of coffee. --- Thank you.
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Beautiful...best of luck...
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excellent~
Excellent ku sis
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs
Susan~~~
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I see it! I see it! The same vision through my window, I truly see it!
What a splendid haiku! I wish you well in the challenge Sis'!
Always ♥
Renee
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Dear Mariza,
Sorry, but in the interests of fair play you must mark your entry "Non-Entry" so that I don't inadvertently award you the GOLD Trophy and upset Yem who is struggling with his 9th. haiku (only 92 to go to reach his olympic record and win LEAD medal.)
A very neat 3/4/2 asymmetric non-entry. Lovely image.
A white tree?
like woman's rear-end
symmetrical haiku best -
not so lopsided
apprause, ruv and hugs, XXX
hu-san.
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Dear Mari, It's lovely to look out the window at night and see the moon. I love to stand outside before retiring and look at all the colours around the moon.
Great haiku
Love Joan
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I don't write much haiku, but i'm starting to know it when i see it; light and shadow and the night brings shapes to the eye in a different way, i often notice how white the trees and leaves can be in moonlight...very nice ...haiku...PK
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I figure if Hugh can do it, so can I!
"Dear Yem (continued)
This is my automated tear-off comment 4/100 which I have printed on roll.
This is the most fantastic entry I have seen on this site.
Good luck with the judging by unohoo.
Applause No.4.
Hu-san "
That isn't fair, you are using real life to help you out...so can I...
trash on floor
rats fight mice
yem's olympic games
You are too good for this contest.
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simple and alluring. I want to look out your window too.
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Dear Solidified
your picture stunning
you can look out my window
show you my etchings. -
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hahahahaha
thanks.
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