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Poetry





Poetry is                     
a dying light.                 
A blossoming smile,           
and a crumpled kite.           

The last resort               
and another choice.           
A song for those         
with a broken voice. 




           

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  • new born
    January 31

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    Beautiful. Easy rhyme and beautiful metaphors.
    'A song for those
    with a broken voice.'
    Lovely.


  • aeolia
    August 21, 2008
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    "Poetry is
    a dying light."

    I really like this idea!


  • Melodies
    August 17, 2008

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    A hug and a smile from me: I am in awe of your writing, dear Poet. This poem is beautiful!


    • wonderbandalice
      August 18, 2008
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      Thank you so much. It's very nice to get such positive comments on my work from such a decorated poet!


  • Frodofan silver member
    August 15, 2008
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    And what type of meter would you call this?

    Check line 3 for typo.


  • Solidified
    August 15, 2008

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    I love the last stanza, I agree.. it does give the silenced a voice. It's a very powerful and empowering tool.

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