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Lies are lawless

my lies are lawless
they hold nothing back
they give all
and take all

i hold no truth
no kindness
no heart warming warning
i spit it out
and kill those who hear

stand in my way
for the law has no power
over the lies i speak

there are no rules
no control
no limit
to what i say
or do

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    August 21, 2008
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    Yup, some people are naturally good at lying. I am very good at lying, but I don't think that's a good thing, I only use it when I need to protect myself or someone else, or hide a surprise. For the latter, that's a good thing, makes it less likely for the person to notice.


  • ShelbieSchizo
    August 16, 2008
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    wow, i really liike iit!
    iits...wow.
    a good 'wow' though.
    Good luck iin the contest.