day to day, I am gambling
in my life, I am stumbling
over misdeeds, I am cuddling
I wonder sometimes when will this end
I wonder how will my life
vanished? how will it end
to the stars up above I stare, and wonder
evil thoughts strikes me like a thunder
the uncertainty of my life is questionable
so much I want to accomplish and give a hand
but the evil men influenced my deeds
and now here I am, here I stand
many lives I have taken
but they won't understand
the uncertainty of my life
the twists and turns seem endless
those I have send to heaven or hell
here they lay breathless
only to the heaven Father I pray
for his blessings and forgiveness
for my life is uncertain, and
today might be my last
for this world is uncertain
here I take my last breath
Author notes
I lost like five troops in a four months period, and it is so hard to fothom this uncertain deaths, and how their families feels, this is dedicated to those who have fallen for me, and for you, and I hope no one is offended or ticked off by my write, and how I constructed it. Hope you all enjoy reading this because it is from the bottom of my heart and dearly hold those who fallen for freedom and for the country. "there are two men who died for us in this world, Jesus and the troops who laid their lives down for our freedom".
***HUGS***
thelegend
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- Life Is Uncertain...Near Death Experience... by azlyn.
499 points, ended August 27, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for this entry...it touched my heart.
Blessings to you always~
Az
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thank you :)
thank you for the opoertunity and for the trophy
I am glad my work touched your heart, I believe we are fighting the same war here, and hope that it will be over with soon, or when the Almighty decides to end it
thank you very much for the opoertunity
***HUGS***
thelegend
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Offended? No way this is sadly brillent!
My heart just went thud..as i read the verse which to me was so sad but the authors notes got to me.
May you live your life out in freedom no matter how or where my dear friend!
God will take care of you either way.
I have seen the light upon your face in pictures,the love of God is in you John.
hugs
and love
~Lisa~
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you made me cry
thank you for your sweet comments and remarkable encouragement, I hope we stay in touch and be friends, lol well thank you.
one day i will be sitting on my Porch sipping on black coffee and read your books, and your poetry, and that day will come when you get to publish your work. God bless your soul my friend
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We will stay in touch! You will be settled and you know i will be here and we may both be reading each others books. you have stories to tell of Gods goodness!
Yep i will be sipping my coffee too (remember no monster drinks for me) lol
Now you made me cry...friends always!
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HEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYYYY
hey, how have you been? long time no talk, hope every thing is good and the ops for your pops went smooth, my prayers are with you and I wish you the best and may the blessings of God be with your family at all times
***HUGS***
thelegend
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