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Poker Face

Breathing heavily down my neck
as I raised the bet.
Begging me not to do it,
but I was right.

He grabbed my arm
so I can't push the chips;
featureless faces smile
mockingly.

Infuriated by his ignorance
I screamed,
slapped him
across the face
with my hand of...

                  ...paper?

A contest entry

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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 16, 2008

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    This is great and shows stubbornness... about like me.

    Best of luck in the contest.

    Riftkin