before you go
you must know
what you've done
how I feel
thought you were the one
thought our love was real
but you've hurt me deep
and scarred my soul
for love, I took a leap
for love, I lost control
before you go
you should know
I loved you once
I truly did
but never again
yeah, that's what I said
before you go
as you go
you'll never know
who I really am
or the life you've left behind
Author notes
This is mostly about my relationship with my son's father.
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This is amazing.. reminds me of my ex.. speechless...
Finals! Thanks for entering good luck
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Wow this is amazing reminds me of my ex I really loved this write and thank you for adding me as a favorite I added you too
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always glad to meet a fellow poet who likes my works as much as i like theirs. i'm really glad that you loved this write and your welcome by the way for the add as i thank you as well for adding me. hope to see more comments from you as i will do my best to give you some in return. glad to hear from ya!
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A very touching poem. You do a great job of expressing what would be felt after your love has hurt you. Nice work!
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thanks for commenting again! always a pleasure to hear a comment from you, bro! i think i'm better at writing about the painful parts of love...LOL! anyways thanks for the comment!
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This is very moving. I am going through a similar problem expieriance. So this one hit home
Well done.
Delila
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i'm sorry that you're going through a similar experience. i just hope that you'll be able to get through it like i have. good luck and i hope all goes well. thanks for your comment! again i wish you the best of luck.
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boys suck. they really are too blind to see the amazing things that are right in front of them a lot of the time. Don't worry hun, you deserve a hell of a lot better, and you'll get it
peace, love, & cheese -
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i love your "peace, love, & cheese" quote! how did you come upon it? anyways thanks for your kind words of encouragement! i have gotten better, i'm engaged to someone better that treats me and my son well. thanks again for the peace, love and never forget the extra cheese!!! ;0)
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lol its just something me and my friend came up with...and i'm glad to hear that you're with a good man now
peace, love, & cheese
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sometimes we go for the people who seem to always hurt us and then another person comforts us but ends up being the same, it's the story of my life at the moment, always waiting for the next heartache.
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sorry to hear, but hopefully the poem gave you some confort. hope things get better for you. thanks for your comment!
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good poem but a lot of capitalization errors
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it's meant to be like that. i did it on purpose.
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