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In The Palm

There is something hard and warm
in the palm
as I reach around your curves now

There is something growing hard
in your palm
as you reach around to me now

There are smiles and fingers and
in the palm
some little sweat or something wet

In his palms the two he loved.
In her palm the one
Into each a little fun,
they had both begun.

Squeezing now on her pair
She had just the one
both but soon realized
palms can have more fun.

So I to your mound descend
rubbing with my palm
you now open wide to my
probing one.

As you now relax and give
yourself to me
I look at my open palm
and there is what I see.

I offer you the first taste
and you give my palm a swipe
and when I taste I declare
"My God, you're ripe"

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  • Angelflower
    August 18, 2008
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    Lol.. I love the last two lines!!! this was a really good write I really enjoyed it.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck in the contest..

    Angel


  • ennovy silver member
    August 17, 2008

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    Very playful, oral....reminds me of eating a peach,,yet I know better....nice erotic write...novy


  • Solidified
    August 15, 2008
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    hahahaha


    Nice addition


  • Solidified
    August 15, 2008
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    hmm this is dirty eh..


    Simple and obscure enough to leave room for the imagination.