For just a moment,
Our eyes catch,
And so much is running through my mind.
An electric current goes through my chest,
And a tingle runs through my spine.
My stomach gains butterflies,
You're so good at that,
Making me love you.
Are you feeling the same thing I do,
When you look into
My eyes,
My windows to my soul?
Do you feel the same thing I do,
Do you feel completely whole?
Are we connecting?
Do you love me too?
I'm too shocked to say anything,
When you say "wazzup Bai."
The highlight of my day,
Was when our eyes caught,
For even just a moment in time,
And we looked into each others eyes.
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Prompt 8
A contest entry
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i like this
thanks for entering -
yes, this is really good. i think it'd be good for the contest.
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My stomach gains butterflies,
You're so good at that,
Making me love you.
Wow! These 3 lines meant the world to me because I know the feeling. I've expierienced that only once, and it was undescribable. I'm very blown away right now, and also deeply touched. Thank you and Good luck!
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Thank God someone who knows who in the hell Celine Dion is. I love her French songs the best but just love her voice in general. The poem itself has me crying for some reason...lovely; thank you for entering
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i really like this. especially the first stanza. i got goosebumps when i read the first stanza, it's that good.
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