I want to spread my wings out far
To fly the skies I see
To any where it doesn't matter
All I want is freedom
Author notes
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In a list
A contest entry
- PIF for Prompt by faithwhisperer.
800 points, ended September 2, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was AWESOME!It totally gave me a sense of freedom and well like I'm flying!So GREAT JOB!
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Nice poem
You spelled skies wrong in the second line. Very nice, short and sweet. Good job and good luck in the contest
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It's what we all want...
Suggestion: last line: "all I want is to be free"
2nd line: "skies, not skyies"
otherwise this poem is brilliant; short, sweet, and so true!
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Very cute idea, and I like the way you ended this too! You don't have to write anything in the Author's Notes usually, unless there's something you want to add...but sometimes it helps, but in this case it's fine. Let the poem speak for itself! Thanks! faith
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