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Just like myself!

Sometimes you seem to me
Like myself
Sometimes like a riddle
Sometimes like a friend
Sometimes like a joy,
Thwarted by life
Or like the helplessness
Untouched by death
Sometimes like a story
Destroyed by death
And like the paper
Burnt by fate
Sometimes like a butterly
Wishing to grab
All those colours
Sometimes you seem to me
Too much
Just like myself

A contest entry

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  • Dajuan
    August 15, 2008

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    Very well written

    This is my frist poem I seen of yours, and I must say this is very good.I love that you kept the lines short for a greater impact.I wish you the best of luck on this contest .