Come on
Why don't you do it?
Turn your back and go
It's not hard is it?
Everybody has left me
Almost everybody I know
I've always dreaded these words
Cause they only make me cry
"I love you and I'll never leave you"
This phrase is just a lie
Cause I've watched a million people just turn their heads
And pretend they never knew me
I've listened as soo many have just laughed
Instead of standing up for me
I've cried so many nights
When I've felt so alone
I've been doing my stuff
Working my ass off
Doing it on my own
I've felt so worthless
So stupid
So weak
And I've spent soo many years faking it
With this lying ass smile on my face
As if I'm just so strong
And I believe in myself
Well I don't
I hate everything about me
Sometimes I'm wondering why I'm still here
But then I remember mother
What would she do if I left
And dad?
He'll feel so guilty
BUT WAIT!
Why should I even care?
Now you act as if you understand
And you'll always be there for me
But DAMN I know you're lying
Ain't nobody got the balls to stick up for me
Nobody gives a fuck
On what I scribble in my IF notebook
Nobody cares
So why should I care about them
So I'm asking you leave me
Leave me now so it wouldn't be that hard for me
Leave me now
So you wouldn't have time hurt me
Forget you ever knew me
And forget all the times I saw you and smile
Cause what you call "love"
I know only last a little while
And because of people like you
I no longer have a heart
Because of people like you
Its been stamp on
crushed
broken and torn apart
So If you expect me to believe you're my friend
I dont need you
I've got myself from birth
And will have me till the end
So just walk out
Just walk out of my life
Cause then if I know youre about to do it
It wouldn't feel as if you've stabbed me with a knife
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1200 points, ended October 8, 2008, 20 entries
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its crappy but sumtimes i feel this way
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This was absolutly amazing!!
I really loved it!!
Omg i've had so many experiences the same.
Don't say you love me unless you mean it, coz i might do something stupid like beleave it!! I live by quotes btw.
I really loved the flow and the rythem.
Fab write.
Well done and good luck!!!!!
Thanks for the kick ass write. Was so powerful and i (unfortunatly) understand every word of it. Don't feel alone honey, you've always got us, the heartbroken and the hopeless
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This is moving
You obviously have a talent and know how to touch people. Keep writting!
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wow this is awsome. I feel that I can relate so well. I this poem isnt published yet you need to start thinking about it, I know that I'd buy your poetry for a fact.
well done
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Please I hate this poem..It's stupid and crappy and hurts somebody I love the most..I'm sorry I ever wrote it
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dont be sorry for anything that comes from your heart, its beautiful, its not stupid or crappy its very nicely written, its just... welll... awsome. keep writting, dont regret any of your writes and you'll make it far with your work. the reason you shouldnt regret anything you write is because no matter what it is, somebody can relate and in this case its everybody at times.
but dont give up keep writing, and I know for a fact you will go far.
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I think we all feel like this sometimes. I'd like to meet a teen who doesn't think their life sucks, or at least one who can honestly say they're happy with it. My favorite part was:
'I've always dreaded these words
Cause they only make me cry
"I love you and I'll never leave you"
This phrase is just a lie'
So true.
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wow
wow girl. this poem is jammed packed tight with a little ribbon on it of emotions and painful truth. i see what your saying, and have felt like this so many times. i mean, i sometimes feel like the word ove is a word just tossed around, having no meaning at all. nice poem, i like it a lot.
I no longer have a heart
Because of people like you
Its been stamp on
crushed
broken and torn apart
you will just have to start over in the game of love after something like that. and maybe we will both find a guy that really loves us. well who knows, maybe we have them right now.
ttyl. great poem babe.
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never dare someone to walk away
they will. pink floyd called it "the wall", what you're building. you have a heart... you wouldn't have written this otherwise.
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