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Just A Kiss

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What magic lies deep within a kiss,
when so effectively we use.
Can they touch us in our hearts,
do our feelings start to ooze.

Just a kiss, seems meaningless,
I‘ve heard that of rhetoric before.
To touch your lips, extend your love,
a kiss is so much more.

It’s the deepest of emotions,
saying I care so much for you.
I’ll be right here when morning comes,
you know you’ve felt it too.

A kiss can say I’ve missed you,
then again may say goodbye.
Sometimes you don’t know what
it will say, not until you try.

So go ahead and kiss her,
your tongues become combined.
Take her where she does
desire, let her lust unwind.


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  • Riftkin gold member
    September 24

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    Soft and so full of emotions. Your words flow with ease within your rhyme. You have done an outstanding job with this.

    Just a kiss is waiting for you...
    but what will it say...


    Joann


  • chilali
    October 20, 2008

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    I loved the softness and the beautiful flow and rhymes in this poem. Great work! Amazing take on the prompt. Congrats on the HM!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 16, 2008

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    WOW!!! I love this poem so much. you're right there is so much to a kiss.. something I think that is often missed, maybe not all the time.. but it does happen. this poem is beautiful, soft and sensual..

    excellent job with this poem & the prompt

    good luck

    kat