if this infinite high lopes separates the two of us
could we just jump in this river and together we crash
if the only way to you're heart is to die
just to be with you do i have to think twice
if we're gonna be blessed with another life
the only thing i'll wish is to be your wife
vows and promises never ending
being with you is my ultimate dream
this deadly river flows to the sea of eternity
please get it rid of me all my fantasy
me and you together is so far from reality
the truth of our crossover is nothing but a deadly sea
A contest entry
- PIF Picture Prompt 10x10 46th Contest by Spiritualangel by spiritualangel.
550 points, ended August 31, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
did i messed it up?
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if we're gonna be blessed with another life
the only thing i'll wish is to be your wife
vows and promises never ending
being with you is my ultimate dream
Beautiful. Best of Luck. -
Sad here, a dream that is so hard to reach...
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yeah me too i think its sad T_T
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i really like it, its very emotional and dark. just the way i like it
good write! ♥
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oh thank you so much^_^
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